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Title artwork by Rachel H.


Monday, May 5, 2014

Isabel P. 4 S

Shoot for the Hoops
       
One wonderful day a girl was born. Her name was Veronica. Veronica loved to play basketball. But, every time she shot, it bounced off of the red box. She tried shooting, dribbling, and even passing with her little brother, but still she was no good.
When she was in the backseat with her little brother going to breakfast, she asked her little brother, “Am I ever going to get better at basketball?” Her little brother had a great solution. He said “every two hours, Nate (their older brother) will put cocoa powder on your bed, don’t eat it, and you will be better at basketball. Just remember to believe.” Veronica at first was very puzzled, but she got used to the idea.
Veronica, her little brother, and their mom went to a diner called Chips. She got an extra fluffy buttermilk pancake with whipped cream and strawberries. Her little brother had delectable chicken tenders with ketchup and fruit. Last but not least, their mom had a beautiful egg white omelet, with tomato, cheese, and spinach. Some of the kids there from Veronica’s school laughed at Veronica when she walked by. They all thought she was a wannabe “I hope your plan will work,” she whispered to her little brother. Her little brother winked, and got his coat, hat, and pair of mittens ready to leave. Veronica gulped. “What if the basketball idea doesn’t work?” she thought. Then, she remembered that her brother was one of the few people she really trusted. She totally believed the idea would work. Veronica got her coat, hat, and her pair of mittens, and walked outside. She started humming a different version of “I Believe I can fly,” but, about basketball. When Veronica arrived at the camouflage truck that her dad, (who was now in the army) owned. But now he got a newer truck. Veronica missed her father oh, so much, it would be nice to see him again. Right now he was fighting in the Afghanistan war. She got in the car and rode to dance.
When she arrived at the dance studio, she said goodbye to her little brother, and walked into the dance studio. She said Hello to many of her friends, and walked into the dressing room and got ready for her dance class. She put up her hair in a bun. Then, she went into class. Veronica practiced plea`s and leaps. The class split up into two groups, and the groups each got to choreograph their own ballet dance. Then they put on special heel shoes and did a technique for ballet called character.
 After character, Veronica had an hour break. So, Veronica did her homework and chatted. Soon it was time for Jazz. Veronica changed and went into class. In class, Veronica a step called Padaborea. A Padaborea is when you put one foot to the back, the other to the side, and the first foot you used to the front. Also, Veronica learned another step, but called the Jazz square. A Jazz Square is when one foot goes to the front, the other foot crosses over the first foot you used, the first foot you used comes to the back, and the other foot that you used goes to the back.
Now Veronica’s dance classes were over. Her mom and little brother came to pick her up. Veronica rode home, and ate a cheeseburger with tomato, for lunch. Her little brother had a cheeseburger with tomato and ketchup. Veronica’s older brother ate a lettuce and tomato burger. Veronica’s mom ate a burger with jalapeños and pickles. Veronica asked her brother if the cocoa powder was doing well so far. Her older brother said it was doing fine. So, Veronica wanted to try the idea out and her older brother took her to the basketball court down the street. Veronica aimed at the red box and flung the ball into the air. SWOOSH! The ball fell into the net. A miracle had happened Veronica finally made a hoop! She believed in herself! The next day, Veronica went to school. In gym, her gym teacher told Veronica that she has improved in basketball, a lot. Soon, Veronica made the school travel team. Then the kids at school had second thoughts about her.


        I guess the moral here is that no matter what always believe.